Hi Katherine, Initially I was unclear what it was that you were trying to do with this project. I had to go to the instructions for the assignment to be able to comment on what you have done here. It looks ad if there was a lot of work put into compiling the information but I don't know who was responsible for what parts. Also, one person presents most of the oral presentation and one person does not say much at all. I guess this is fair if the work was distributed but I just can't tell from the video. I think your video would have been more effective I was able to read what was on the Smartboard. A voice over with the Smartboard screen only may have worked better due to the fact that there was so much text read and it was hard to hear. The video came across at times as a group of girls taking turns reading something off of a screen. I think you all put a lot of work into this and that there was a lot of really good content. I just wish it was presented differently.
Hi Katherine,
ReplyDeleteInitially I was unclear what it was that you were trying to do with this project. I had to go to the instructions for the assignment to be able to comment on what you have done here. It looks ad if there was a lot of work put into compiling the information but I don't know who was responsible for what parts. Also, one person presents most of the oral presentation and one person does not say much at all. I guess this is fair if the work was distributed but I just can't tell from the video. I think your video would have been more effective I was able to read what was on the Smartboard. A voice over with the Smartboard screen only may have worked better due to the fact that there was so much text read and it was hard to hear. The video came across at times as a group of girls taking turns reading something off of a screen. I think you all put a lot of work into this and that there was a lot of really good content. I just wish it was presented differently.